IELTS Writing Task 1 report sample 2933 – Band 7.5

Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 - Report

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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Candidate’s Response:

The line graph depicts how much carbon dioxide was emitted per person in 4 different countries (the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal) from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric tonnes. Overall, the British were the nation with the highest carbon dioxide production throughout the given period.

To begin with, the amount of Co2 emitted in the United Kingdom and Sweden decreased in the forty-year period. In 1967, the UK produced around 11 metric tonnes of Co2 which gradually reduced to less than 9 metric tonnes in 2007. Although this amount had a downward trend throughout the period in question, the UK generated the highest amount of Co2 among the other countries. Similarly, Co2 emissions in Sweden started at less than 9 metric tonnes; it peaked at around 10 metric tonnes in 1977 before, it sharply declined to roughly 5 metric tonnes in the final year.

On the other hand, different picture emerged for Italy and Portugal, with an increase in Co2 emissions during the given period. Both countries, followed almost the same pattern with a steady increase, prior to leveling off from 1997 to 2007.Their starting point was close to 4 metric tonnes and approximately 1 metric tonnes Co2 emissions for Italy and Portugal respectively. In 1997, at around 8 co2 emissions for Italy and 5 co2 emissions for Portugal were the highest level of co2 production which remained almost stable until the end of the period.

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Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

April 9, 2024

This is an IELTS writing band 7.5 sample

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IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Achievement (Ac)
9.0 fully satisfies all the requirements of the task
8.0 presents, highlights and illustrates key features clearly and appropriately
9.0 details are fully and clearly extended.
9.0 presents a clear overview of main trends, differences, or stages
8.0
Coherence and Cohesion
9.0 sequences information and ideas logically
8.0 manages all aspects of cohesion well
9.0 uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately
9.0 uses referencing clearly and appropriately throughout
8.0 uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately
8.0
Lexical Resource
7.0 uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision
8.0 skillfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation
8.0 produces rare errors in spelling and/or word formation
9.0 the communication is completely natural
7.0
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7.0 uses a variety of complex structures
8.0 the majority of sentences are error-free
8.0 makes only very occasional errors or inappropriacies
9.0 communication is completely natural
7.0
7.5

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Another Above 7.0 Sample

The line graph illustrates trends in average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. The graph reveals significant differences in emission patterns across these four European countries.
The United Kingdom had the highest emissions throughout the period, starting at around 11 metric tonnes of CO2 per person in 1967. While emissions fluctuated over the years, they showed a gradual downward trend, reaching around 9 metric tonnes by 2007. Sweden also began with relatively high emissions (around 9 metric tonnes in 1967) but displayed a distinct pattern. Emissions peaked in 1977 at over 10 metric tonnes before experiencing a significant decline, reaching around 5 metric tonnes by 2007, the lowest level among the four countries.
In contrast, Italy and Portugal exhibited a steady rise in CO2 emissions throughout the period. Italy started at around 4 metric tonnes per person in 1967 and nearly doubled to almost 8 metric tonnes by 2007. Portugal displayed a similar trend, starting from a low of around 1.5 metric tonnes in 1967 and reaching nearly 6 metric tonnes by 2007.
Overall, the graph highlights the varying trends in CO2 emissions among these four European nations. The UK and Sweden, despite starting with higher emissions, showed signs of reduction by 2007, while Italy and Portugal experienced a continuous increase in emissions throughout the period.
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