IELTS Writing Task 1 Report sample 3432 – Band 7.5

Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 - Report

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today.

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Candidate’s Response:

The following two maps depict the transformation taking place in Porth Harbour since 2000. While some elements have remained the same, the landmark change was the octagon-shaped castle, which had been left disused, now functions as a hotel today.

The hotel, located in the south-east corner of the map, now takes advantage of a fully dedicated beach for itself; it used to be for everyone. In addition, there is a new access to the nearby road that eventually leads to the main road in the west. The road now passes by not only the lifeboat area but also a newly-built cafes and shops to the west of it. To the west of cafes and shops is now where fishing boats used to dock, but is now Marina for private yachts.

The west of the map has gone through the fewest number of changes. As mentioned, fishing boats and the Marina have swapped places, so the Marina occupies a larger area. On top of that, the car park to the west now has a new set of showers and toilets to its north. The other car park and set of showers adjacent to fishing boats have remained untouched.

To the north, the only major change was the addition of another dock to double the capacity. The passenger ferries and the access to the public beach in the north have witnessed no visible modifications. All in all, there have been only a couple of additional facilities to Porth Harbour.

250 words
Presented By: Kasra Sharifan

Presented By: Kasra Sharifan

March 11, 2025

This is an IELTS writing band 7.5 sample

Disclaimer

The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.

IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Achievement (Ac)
9.0 fully satisfies all the requirements of the task
8.0 presents, highlights and illustrates key features clearly and appropriately
9.0 details are fully and clearly extended.
9.0 presents a clear overview of main trends, differences, or stages
8.0
Coherence and Cohesion
9.0 sequences information and ideas logically
8.0 manages all aspects of cohesion well
9.0 uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately
9.0 uses referencing clearly and appropriately throughout
9.0 skillfully manages paragraphing
8.0
Lexical Resource
9.0 uses a wide range of vocabulary
8.0 skillfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation
9.0 rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’
9.0 the communication is completely natural
8.0
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7.0 uses a variety of complex structures
9.0 with full flexibility and accuracy
9.0 rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’
9.0 communication is completely natural
7.0
7.5

Feedback:

Thank you for writing this report. The response effectively highlights the key changes in Porth Harbour with strong comparisons and a clear structure. The vocabulary is varied and appropriate, and the use of cohesive devices enhances readability. However, minor grammatical errors, slight awkward phrasings, and some redundant expressions slightly impact fluency. Refinements such as improving sentence transitions, ensuring consistency in tense usage, and making the final summary more precise could help the report reach 8.0 and higher.

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Another Above 7.0 Sample

The following two maps illustrate the transformation of Porth Harbour since 2000. While some elements have remained unchanged, the most significant development is the conversion of the formerly disused octagon-shaped castle into a hotel.
The hotel, located in the southeast corner of the map, now benefits from an exclusive private beach, which was previously open to the public. Additionally, a new access road has been introduced, connecting the hotel to the main road in the west. This road now passes by both the lifeboat area and newly built cafés and shops, which have been added west of the lifeboat station. To the west of these cafés and shops, the area that previously accommodated fishing boats has been repurposed as a marina for private yachts.
The western section of the harbour has undergone minimal changes. As mentioned, the marina and fishing boats have swapped locations, with the marina now occupying a larger area. Furthermore, the car park to the west has been upgraded with an additional set of showers and toilets to its north. However, the other car park and the showers adjacent to the fishing boats have remained unchanged.
In the northern part of the harbour, the most notable alteration is the addition of an extra dock, effectively doubling the docking capacity. Meanwhile, the passenger ferries and access to the public beach in the north have remained unchanged.
Overall, Porth Harbour has undergone several enhancements, with new facilities such as a hotel, private beach, cafés, and an expanded marina, while retaining key functional elements like passenger ferry services and public access to the northern beach.
266 words

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