IELTS Writing Task 1 Report sample 3419 – Band 6.5

Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 - Report

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries.

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Candidate’s Response:

The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian export trades across four nations from 1990 to 2012. According to the data, it is clear that China’s percentage strikingly incresed over time, while the other countries’ proportion decreased overall.

From 1990 to 2000, India reamined remained steady, with a persentage percentage of less than 5%, while China reached 5% in 2000, after reamining remaining under 5% until 1995. The US slightly decreased from more than 10% in 1990 to less than 10% in 1995, before growing again to more than 10% in 2000. On the other hand, Japan experienced a more evident downward trend: starting from more than 25% in 1990, it decreased to 20% in 1995 and to less than 20% in 2000.

Despite having a low proportion in the first part of the decade, China experienced an evident growth from 2000 to 2012: starting from 5%, it rised rose to 10%, before peaking to 25% in 2010. Moreover, it slightly increased to almost 30% in 2012. On the contrary, Japan remained steady between 2000 and 2005, but slightly decreased to around 15% in 2010, before remaining steady again untill 2012. While India slightly increased to more than 5% from 2000 to 2010, before decreasing again to 5% in 2012, the US slightly decreased from around 10% in 2000 to 2010, before a very little growth in 2012.

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Presented By: Kasra Sharifan

Presented By: Kasra Sharifan

February 20, 2025

This is an IELTS writing band 6.5 sample

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IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Achievement (Ac)
7.0 covers the requirements of the task
7.0 clearly presents and highlights key features
6.0 details may be irrelevant, inappropriate, or inaccurate
6.0 presents an overview with information appropriately selected
6.0
Coherence and Cohesion
6.0 arranges information and ideas coherently
6.0 there is a clear overall progression
6.0 uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical
9.0 uses referencing clearly and appropriately throughout
7.0 presents a clear central topic within each paragraph
6.0
Lexical Resource
7.0 uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision
7.0 uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation
7.0 may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation
9.0 the communication is completely natural
7.0
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7.0 uses a variety of complex structures
7.0 produces frequent error-free sentences
7.0 has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors
7.0 they do not impede communication
7.0
6.5

Feedback:

Thank you for writing this report. The candidate generally addresses the task, summarizing the main trends and making some relevant comparisons. There is a notable factual inaccuracy, which is underlined, i.e. two countries increased whereas the two other ones decreased in the given period. There are many spelling mistakes none of which affects the reader's understanding.
Transitional phrases (like "on the other hand") are used, but sometimes they do not effectively guide the reader through the progression of information.

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The 6.5 sample upgraded to 7.0+

The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian export trades with four nations (Japan, the US, China, and India) from 1990 to 2012. According to the data, it is clear that China’s percentage of exports dramatically increased over time, while Japan’s share declined steadily. The trends for the US and India were relatively stable with minor fluctuations.
In 1990, Japan was the largest importer of Australian goods, accounting for over 25% of exports. This percentage declined steadily over the years, reaching 20% in 2000 and dropping further to around 15% by 2012. In contrast, China started with a low percentage of under 5% until 1995. From 2000 onwards, China’s share rose sharply, reaching approximately 25% in 2010 and nearly 30% by 2012, making it the largest destination for Australian exports by the end of the period.
The US experienced a slight decline from just over 10% in 1990 to below 10% by 1995. It recovered briefly in 2000, surpassing 10% again, but gradually decreased to around 5% by 2012. India remained relatively steady, starting at around 3% in 1990 and maintaining a similar level until 2000. From 2000 to 2010, it showed a modest increase, peaking slightly above 5%, but then declined slightly in 2012.
In summary, while Japan’s and the US’s shares of Australian exports decreased over the period, China showed a substantial increase. India’s share remained low and stable, with a small rise in the later years.
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