Protected: IELTS Writing Task 1 Report sample 3413 – Band 6.5

Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 - Report

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

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Presented By: Kasra Sharifan

August 28, 2020

This is an IELTS writing band 6.5 sample

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The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.

IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Achievement (Ac)

6.0 addresses the requirements of the task

6.0 presents and adequately highlights key features

7.0 could be more fully extended

6.0 presents an overview with information appropriately selected

6.0

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0 logically organizes information and ideas

7.0 there is clear progression throughout

7.0 uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use

9.0 uses referencing clearly and appropriately throughout

5.0 may not write in paragraphs, or paragraphing may be inadequate

7.0

Lexical Resource

6.0 uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task

7.0 uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation

6.0 makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation

6.0 they do not impede communication

6.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0 uses a variety of complex structures

7.0 produces frequent error-free sentences

7.0 has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors

7.0 they do not impede communication

7.0

6.5

Feedback:

Thank you for writing this report. The candidate has produced a good response that covers the main aspects of the maps. However, to achieve a higher score, more precise detail, improved coherence, and enhanced grammatical range are needed. The overall structure is solid, but there is room for refinement in vocabulary usage and grammatical accuracy.

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The maps illustrate the current layout of the Norbiton industrial area and the proposed future development of the site.

Overall, the area is set to undergo significant changes, with the existing industrial facilities being replaced by residential housing and amenities such as a school and shops.

At present, the industrial area features a large roundabout at its center, accessible from a main road to the south. Surrounding the roundabout, there are several factories, with three located to the southwest and the remaining five situated along the eastern side, connected by side roads. To the north of the area, farmland lies adjacent to a river.

The proposed redevelopment plan includes the construction of a smaller roundabout to the south, connecting to the existing one. Additionally, the large roundabout will be modified to incorporate two new roads. The factories will be replaced by residential housing, and various new facilities will be introduced, including shops, a medical center, and a playground. In the northern section, a T-shaped road will lead to a new bridge over the river, providing access to additional housing on the farmland.

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