IELTS Writing Task 1 report sample 3013 – Band 6.0

Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 - Report

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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Candidate’s Response:

The two maps trace the existing map and a proposed plan for the development of a town centre called Islip. Overall, the town supposed to face the considerable modifications in its buildings and facilities as compared to the current layout.

With regard to the north side of the map, it can be clearly seen that the main development is expected to happen in this area. The country side will be completely removed, and the eight existing shops will be replaced by a bus station, a shopping centre, a car , and a new housing. Moreover, pedestrians only zone has been designed to be replaced the space which currently is a main road. Additionally, the shops located in the south side of the main road will face no change.

Turning to the middle and south parts of the Islip town centre plan, it can be observed that fewer changes will happen to this area. A new housing will be constructed on the southeast. The current parking area on the southeast of the map will be smaller, and the south school and housing will experience no change, except a negligible increase on school size.

A noticeable change in the planned development map is the construction of a dual carriageway which does not exist in the current layout. The Dual carriageway Will be designed to have two ways for exit and entrance to the east and west side with a semi-circle shape all around the Islip town centre.

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Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

April 15, 2024

This is an IELTS writing band 6.0 sample

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Disclaimer

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Assessor’s Comment

Thank you indeed for writing this report. The candidate has made an effort to report on the main features of the maps with a clear structure and relevant vocabulary. However, the response lacks detailed comparison and contains grammatical errors that could easily be avoided. More precise language and accurate grammar would improve the clarity and overall score.

Kasra Sharifan

IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Achievement (Ac)

9.0 fully satisfies all the requirements of the task

8.0 presents, highlights and illustrates key features clearly and appropriately

6.0 details may be irrelevant, inappropriate, or inaccurate

9.0 presents a clear overview of main trends, differences, or stages

6.0

Coherence and Cohesion

9.0 sequences information and ideas logically

7.0 there is clear progression throughout

9.0 uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately

6.0 may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately

8.0 uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately

6.0

Lexical Resource

7.0 uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision

7.0 uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation

7.0 may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation

6.0 they do not impede communication

6.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0 uses a variety of complex structures

8.0 the majority of sentences are error-free

7.0 has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors

6.0 errors rarely reduce communication

6.0

Feedback:

Thank you indeed for writing this report. The candidate has made an effort to report on the main features of the maps with a clear structure and relevant vocabulary. However, the response lacks detailed comparison and contains grammatical errors that could easily be avoided. More precise language and accurate grammar would improve the clarity and overall score.

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An Above 7.0 Sample

The maps present a comparison between the current layout of the center of Islip, a small town, and the proposed development plans for its future.

Currently, the town center is directly accessible from the main road, which is flanked by shops on either side leading to a school located in the southwestern part of the layout. Residential houses are situated on the east and south of the school, with a large park adjacent to the southeastern housing area. The northern part of the town center is bordered by countryside, indicating a blend of urban and rural elements.

In contrast, the development plan proposes significant changes. The main road will be expanded into a dual carriageway, suggesting an anticipation of increased traffic flow. The shopping area will be centralized in a large shopping center, situated to the north of the dual carriageway, which will be complemented by a bus station and a car park to its east, enhancing the town's transport infrastructure.

The school will remain in its original location, but the area surrounding it will be transformed into a pedestrian zone, which will likely improve safety and create a more pleasant environment for walking. This zone will also feature an array of shops, presumably to cater to both the students and residents. The existing park will be reduced in size to accommodate new housing, which will be constructed to the east and west of the park. This suggests an increase in the local population or a move to densify the residential area.

The planned development indicates a shift towards a more integrated town center with a focus on commercial activity and transport, while also addressing the need for additional housing. It reflects a possible growth strategy for Islip, aimed at urbanization and economic development.

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