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November 14, 2023
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Thank you for writing this essay. State your opinion clearly and directly in both the introduction and conclusion (e.g. “In my view, the disadvantages for people and businesses are more serious than the environmental benefits.”). Develop each main idea with clear, specific explanations and a more concrete example; the environmental side is clearer (carbon footprint, greenhouse gases, air quality); the Individual side is weaker, however.

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