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Write about the following topic:
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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February 28, 2020
The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.
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Thank you for writing this essay. It addresses the causes and solutions of social media replacing face-to-face interaction, but it needs deeper idea development, stronger coherence (The essay lacks a strong thesis statement in the introduction, and the conclusion is vague and does not summarize key points effectively), and improved grammar (Sentence fragments and awkward phrasing reduce readability).
Recommendations for Improvement:
- Develop ideas more fully: Explain points with specific examples and avoid repetition.
- Improve coherence and cohesion: Use linking words more effectively and ensure smooth transitions.
- Expand lexical resource: Use a wider range of vocabulary naturally and accurately.
- Fix grammatical errors: Pay attention to verb tenses, articles, and sentence structure.
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