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November 4, 2020
The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.
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Thank you for writing this essay. The essay responds well to all parts of the question and maintains a clear argument; adding a more concrete example or data could push it firmly to the higher end. The vocabulary range is quite strong, but multiple spelling errors prevent it from reaching a higher band. There are a few minor subject–verb agreement issues (e.g., “so does our habits” should be “so do our habits”).
Some run-on sentences where two clauses are joined with just a comma instead of proper punctuation or a conjunction.
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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes.
What are the reasons for this?
Is this a positive or a negative development?
Some people think that it’s a good Idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it’s important to keep working life completely separate from social life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.