IELTS Writing Task 2 essay sample 3297 – Band 6.0

IELTS Writing Task 2 - Essay

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In today’s job market, it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Candidate’s Response:

In this modern era job market, functional skills are valued over academic knowledge. It is predicted that in the later time employers will seek merely the experience rather than any official degrees.

I do agree with the statement particularly as to careers which are related to art and creativity. For instance, when a tech company needs a new employee in its design department between a person with a significant portfolio plus several years experience and one with only a MA or MD degree from a prestigious university surely, the one with experience has far more chance to fill the job vacancy than the person with just an academic degree. Hence the importance of skills and experience. Furthermore, technology have made it much easier to get any kind of knowledge or skills without having to go to any educational centers. To exemplify, individuals can learn skills such as doodling, photoshop or mathematics either via the internet on a YouTube channel or by buying an educational package. Thus, attending to or university so that you get an official degree is by no means the primary criteria to get a job in the future.

Despite those of mentioned a above, there are still some fields that academic education is critical and people will not be able to work unless they earn the necessary knowledge. Being a psychologist or a surgeon for instance, is impossible without having a license and in my opinion, the necessity of proper degree in some specific area such as science will not change even in the future.

By way of conclusion, I contend that even though the importance of practical skills outweighs the academic degree to find a job, there are many careers yet, knowledge plays the crucial role.

290 words

Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

February 17, 2024

This is an IELTS writing band 6.0 sample

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Disclaimer

The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.

IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Response

7.0 addresses all parts of the task

7.0 presents a clear position throughout the response

7.0 presents, extends, and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalize and/or supporting ideas may lack focus

7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0 logically organizes information and ideas

6.0 there is a clear overall progression

6.0 uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical

6.0 may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately

6.0 uses paragraphing, but not always logically

6.0

Lexical Resource

7.0 uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision

7.0 uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation

6.0 makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation

6.0 they do not impede communication

6.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0 uses a variety of complex structures

6.0 complex sentences have the same accuracy as the simple ones do

6.0 makes some errors in grammar and punctuation

6.0 errors rarely reduce communication

6.0

Feedback:

Thank you indeed for writing this essay. Apart from some small errors in punctuation, grammar and vocabulary, the essay can improve its coherence and cohesion by using more accurate connecting words/phrases (i.e. discourse markers). Studying defying relative clause pronouns will greatly help sentence transitions, not to mention the possibility of a higher score in grammatical range and accuracy.

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The 6.0 sample upgraded to 7.0+

In the contemporary job market, practical skills have assumed a pivotal role, far surpassing the importance of theoretical knowledge. Moreover, as we look ahead, there is a plausible scenario where formal qualifications may become dispensable. I wholeheartedly agree with this trend and believe that it is a positive development for several compelling reasons.

First and foremost, practical skills are directly applicable to the workplace, enabling individuals to navigate complex challenges and contribute meaningfully from day one. Employers often value candidates who possess hands-on experience and the ability to solve real-world problems. This not only increases productivity but also fosters a culture of innovation and adaptability within organizations.

Secondly, the future job market is expected to be marked by rapid technological advancements and shifting industry demands. In such a dynamic landscape, the flexibility of practical skills is invaluable. Unlike theoretical knowledge, which can quickly become outdated, practical skills can be continuously honed and adapted to match the evolving needs of employers.

Furthermore, the growing emphasis on practical skills encourages lifelong learning. Job applicants will be more inclined to engage in continuous skill development, thereby enhancing their overall competence. This proactive approach not only benefits individuals but also contributes to the progress of industries and the economy.

In conclusion, practical skills are undeniably more crucial in the contemporary job market, and the notion that formal qualifications may become optional in the future is a welcome prospect. This shift promotes workplace readiness, adaptability, and a culture of ongoing learning, ultimately benefiting both job seekers and the broader society.

255 words