IELTS Writing Task 2 essay sample 3259 – Band 6.0

IELTS Writing Task 2 - Essay

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular.
Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular?
What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Candidate’s Response:

These days novels and TV dramas that are related to crime draw attention of people around the world. I will outline the reasons behind this popularity and will give my idea in this regrd.

On the one hand, these books and TV shows drawing more people because they inspire a sense of excitement, which is an intrinsic part of such dramas. They use visual effects in the process of producing these programs on TV which make them attractive, and people would like to follow these shows on a regular basis. Moreover, producers of these dramas would trigger the sense of curiosity in viewers who would like to know what will be happening in the future. It causes individuals to continue the progress of these dramas on TV, even books , which publish the content of criminal shows, have the same results on citizens. As a result of having negative effects, i don’t favor of these sows which i wil explain in the next paragraph.

Firstly, viewers migh have a tendency to commit the criminal activities which, have seen on TV. It could be destructive. It might lead to losing their life or falling the prison. In addition, these dramas would teach offenders new trics and techniques, which have been added to the show for being more appealing. They would damage the society by increasing the rate of criminalpractices via criminals. Finally, fellow citien would be more anxious because of seeing these programmes and reading crime fiction which has reflected the insight of these TV shows. Tey would lose their calmness. As they wait for the rest of story that drama will give them a sense of insecurity.

In conclusion, these dramas are appealing because of having interesting features which lead to triggering a sense of discovery in viewer, and i don’t hold a positive view in this regard as they could have negative effects on people in society.

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Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

April 13, 2024

This is an IELTS writing band 6.0 sample

Disclaimer

The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.

IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Response
7.0 addresses all parts of the task
6.0 presents a relevant position although the conclusions may become unclear or repetitive
6.0 presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear
6.0
Coherence and Cohesion
7.0 logically organizes information and ideas
6.0 there is a clear overall progression
6.0 uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical
6.0 may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately
6.0 uses paragraphing, but not always logically
6.0
Lexical Resource
7.0 uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision
6.0 attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy
6.0 makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation
6.0 they do not impede communication
6.0
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7.0 uses a variety of complex structures
6.0 complex sentences have the same accuracy as the simple ones do
6.0 makes some errors in grammar and punctuation
6.0 errors rarely reduce communication
6.0
6.0

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Thank you indeed for writing this essay. The essay addresses all parts of the task, but needs to develop the main ideas further. One issue here is that despite multiple attempts to use complex vocabulary and structure, more practice is needed to execute the structures/word formations more accurately.

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The 6.0 sample upgraded to 7.0+

In contemporary society, crime novels and TV crime dramas have witnessed a surge in popularity across many countries. Several factors contribute to their widespread appeal, and public opinions on these genres vary. This essay explores the reasons behind the popularity of crime fiction and TV crime dramas and presents a personal perspective on their value.
The rising popularity of crime novels and TV crime dramas can be attributed to various factors. First and foremost, human beings have an inherent fascination with the mystery and intrigue associated with crime. These genres offer an escape into a world of suspense and challenge the audience's intellect by presenting intricate puzzles to solve. Furthermore, the characters and their moral dilemmas in crime narratives often reflect complex aspects of human nature, making them relatable and thought-provoking. These stories also offer a temporary respite from the routine of daily life, providing an adrenaline rush and a chance to experience the thrill of solving crimes vicariously.
From a personal standpoint, I find crime fiction and TV crime dramas to be engaging and captivating. They provide an excellent opportunity for viewers and readers to exercise their critical thinking skills, attempting to solve the mysteries alongside the protagonists. Moreover, these narratives often delve into important social and ethical issues, shedding light on the complexities of the human psyche. As a result, they not only entertain but also provoke thought and discussion.
In conclusion, the popularity of crime novels and TV crime dramas can be attributed to their ability to tap into humanity's innate curiosity, challenge the intellect, and explore profound aspects of human behavior. Personally, I appreciate these genres for their capacity to entertain and stimulate thought. In a world filled with numerous forms of entertainment, crime fiction and TV crime dramas continue to hold a special place in the hearts and minds of many.
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