IELTS Writing Task 2 essay sample 3254 – Band 7.0

IELTS Writing Task 2 - Essay

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Candidate’s Response:

It is true that there are some great benefits to living in a house, while the drawbacks of it cannot be denied.

There could be several reasons why some people prefer to live in a house rather than a flat. First of all, houses give people more freedom of action. Families living in a villa feel freer to throw parties, have their friends and relatives over, put on music, etc. as they do not need to be worried about the excessive noise caused by such activities. By contrast, people who live in an apartment may have some inconsiderate neighbours who disturb them all the time by making too much noise. Big families tend to be willing to live in a house because it gives the kids more room to play around than a flat does. The children can play together in the yard and invite their friends to join their games. I believe this is a great opportunity for kids to learn social skills, while kids who live in apartments are more likely to become less social or even socially underdeveloped.

However, living in a house also has some drawbacks along. Houses certainly are not as safe and secure as flats. Most apartment buildings have security guards who watch the building throughout day and night. Furthermore, apartments located on higher floors are less likely to get robbed. Another negative point of living in a house is that the maintenance expenses of a house are usually higher than a flat. At the same time, individuals living in a house have to pay higher electricity, water and gas bills.

In conclusion, I am convinced that living in a house has its own pros and cons, and everyone should decide whether to live in a villa or an apartment based on their own priorities and lifestyle.

303 words
Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

December 29, 2023

This is an IELTS writing band 7.0 sample

Disclaimer

The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.

IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Response
7.0 addresses all parts of the task
7.0 presents a clear position throughout the response
7.0 presents, extends, and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalize and/or supporting ideas may lack focus
7.0
Coherence and Cohesion
7.0 logically organizes information and ideas
7.0 there is clear progression throughout
9.0 uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately
9.0 uses referencing clearly and appropriately throughout
6.0 uses paragraphing, but not always logically
6.0
Lexical Resource
9.0 uses a wide range of vocabulary
8.0 skillfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation
9.0 rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’
9.0 the communication is completely natural
8.0
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7.0 uses a variety of complex structures
8.0 the majority of sentences are error-free
9.0 rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’
9.0 communication is completely natural
7.0
7.0

Feedback:

Thank you indeed for writing this essay. The IELTS question is addressed in the conclusion by saying, “I’m convinced …” however, it is not developed further telling the reader what lifestyle items and priorities are considered by the reader. If security, floor number, peace and quiet are those items, then we need a sentence saying these are the items discussed here (with a reason saying why these 4 are here), and then taking a neutral stand.

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The choice between living in a house or an apartment is a matter of personal preference, each offering its unique advantages and disadvantages. However, when evaluating the benefits of living in a house compared to an apartment, it becomes evident that houses often provide more advantages than apartments.
One primary advantage of living in a house is the increased space and privacy it offers. Houses typically come with larger indoor and outdoor areas, which allow residents to enjoy more living space and the luxury of a private yard or garden. This is particularly advantageous for families, as it provides room for children to play and for homeowners to engage in hobbies or host gatherings without feeling constrained by limited space, which is often the case in apartments.
Moreover, houses tend to offer a stronger sense of ownership and control. Homeowners have the freedom to modify and personalize their properties as they see fit, from landscaping to interior renovations. This control over one's living space fosters a strong sense of belonging and security.
Houses also tend to provide better insulation and soundproofing, resulting in a quieter and more peaceful living environment. This is in contrast to many apartment buildings, which often suffer from noise disturbances due to shared walls and floors.
While apartments may offer advantages such as cost savings and easier maintenance, the overall quality of life in a house, particularly for families or those seeking space and privacy, is often superior.
In conclusion, living in a house generally presents more advantages than living in an apartment. The increased space, privacy, control, and comfort associated with houses make them an attractive option for those seeking a higher quality of life.
280 words

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