IELTS Writing Task 2 essay sample 3216 – Band 7.0

IELTS Writing Task 2 - Essay

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Candidate’s Response:

This fires up a heated argument over whether studying liberal arts including literature produces more benefits or drawbacks on high school students’ lives. While there are many debates that studying literature could waste ample time of students, I would argue that it can be beneficial in other ways.

On the one hand, many educationalists believe that literature is intertwined with cultural and historical aspects of each society. In addition, studying literature can facilitate students to gain a comprehensive understanding of their culture, history and their ethos. The schools should educate students to learn about their culture and language on early ages. Therefore, students can broaden their horizons through spending their leisure time on reading novels and poems.

On the other hand, the advocates of STEM courses (Science, Technology, Engineering and Mathematics) maintain that studying liberal arts cannot provide students a broaden range of job opportunities which they are not the demand of today’s communities. Needless to say, it is beneficial to the youth to spend their precious time on studying STEM courses rather than non-STEM subjects. In the long run, young people can occupy the most important and demanding positions with higher rate of income. For instance, many developing and third world countries do not invest on liberal arts and students who are in favor of literature or history would face many troubles to find a relevant career.

To sum up, I believe novels and poems are inseparable components of each society’s literature and studying them could be advantageous due to familiarizing the new generation with their background and culture.

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Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

November 19, 2023

This is an IELTS writing band 7.0 sample

Disclaimer

The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.

IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Response
9.0 fully addresses all parts of the task
8.0 presents a well-developed response to the question
8.0 with relevant, extended, and supported ideas
8.0
Coherence and Cohesion
7.0 logically organizes information and ideas
7.0 there is clear progression throughout
7.0 uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use
6.0 may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately
8.0 uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately
6.0
Lexical Resource
9.0 uses a wide range of vocabulary
8.0 skillfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation
7.0 may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation
9.0 the communication is completely natural
7.0
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7.0 uses a variety of complex structures
8.0 the majority of sentences are error-free
8.0 makes only very occasional errors or inappropriacies
7.0 they do not impede communication
7.0
7.0

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Thank you indeed for writing this essay. The rubric cannot be used as an introduction to the essay; the essay is self-reliant in all its important elements, so the topic and its aspects must be introduced in the introduction.

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The debate over whether high school students should invest their time in studying literature, such as novels and poems, is a topic of contention. I strongly disagree with the notion that it is a waste of time, as literature offers valuable benefits in terms of critical thinking, empathy, and cultural awareness.
Firstly, literature serves as a platform for enhancing critical thinking skills. Novels and poems often present complex narratives and themes that require students to analyze, interpret, and draw conclusions. This analytical approach fosters cognitive development, encouraging students to think critically and problem-solve, skills that are crucial in their academic and professional lives.
Moreover, literature plays a vital role in developing empathy. Reading about diverse characters and situations in literature allows students to step into the shoes of others, promoting understanding and compassion. This empathetic perspective is essential for building strong interpersonal relationships and addressing societal issues effectively.
Additionally, literature provides valuable cultural insights. Through studying literature from different time periods and regions, students gain a broader understanding of various cultures, histories, and societal norms. This exposure fosters cultural awareness and tolerance, which are increasingly important in our interconnected world.
While some argue that literature may not have direct vocational benefits, its broader educational advantages in terms of critical thinking, empathy, and cultural awareness are indispensable. To omit literature from high school curricula would deny students the opportunity to develop these crucial skills and perspectives.
In conclusion, studying literature, including novels and poems, in high school is far from a waste of time. It is an essential component of education that enhances critical thinking, fosters empathy, and promotes cultural awareness among students.
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