IELTS Writing Task 1 letter sample 3274 – Band 6.5

General Training IELTS Writing Task 1 - Letter

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

Give details of the course you took at the university

Explain why you recommend the university

Give some advice about how to apply

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

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The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.

Candidate’s Response:

Dear Alex ,

I am writing to you regarding the IT Course which i have Completed at India university and is appealing to you.

Regarding the Course itself , it was an intensive period which had been introduced by IT’s department of university . It is very well-known for having profesional mentors and equiped laboratories . Apart from of it , that course included two hours theory lessons at the morning and three hours practical class at the evening . those copact timetables began at 9 to 12 am and from 4 pm to 8 pm , from 1 january to 30 january .

The reason why i suggest India university , is related to having knowledgeable and paitient mentors . They could explain sophisticated issues which are hard to understand because they have a good mastery over the computer skills such as programming . In addition , if you have misunderstanding about an subject , they would repeat it paitiently , again and again in order to fix that issue in your mind .

For applying to this Course , you should download the essential forms from university’s website and Complete them carefully along with paying 100 dollar for registration which would be done via online payment . Moreover , you would have to utilize a powerful laptop like Asus X66 that has a good speed for processing the program . Although it is not a must , it’s my personal Comment to alleviate your education .

I will be glad to hear from you in this regard .

Regards ,

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Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

January 16, 2024

This is an IELTS writing band 6.5 sample

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Disclaimer

The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.

IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Achievement (GT)

8.0 covers all requirements of the task sufficiently

8.0 presents, highlights and illustrates bullet points clearly and appropriately

9.0 details are fully and clearly extended.

9.0 presents a clear purpose

8.0

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0 logically organizes information and ideas

7.0 there is clear progression throughout

7.0 uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use

9.0 uses referencing clearly and appropriately throughout

7.0 presents a clear central topic within each paragraph

7.0

Lexical Resource

7.0 uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision

7.0 uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation

6.0 makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation

5.0 that may cause some difficulty for the reader

5.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0 uses a variety of complex structures

7.0 produces frequent error-free sentences

7.0 has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors

6.0 errors rarely reduce communication

6.0

6.5

Feedback:

Thank you indeed for writing this letter. Let me first focus on Content Clarity; the course content is somewhat unclear. Consider providing more specific details about the curriculum, key subjects, or any notable projects you worked on during the IT course. In addition, the mention of the timetable is a good addition, but the information about the course duration seems inconsistent (from January 1 to January 30). These points may not directly affect IELTS scoring but will expand our creative minds to come up with more relevant vocabulary.

The task achievement is detailed and relevant, with proper development for each part. The main focus should be on vocabulary. Before we let any new word enter our writing sheet, we must consult a dictionary to find out what they mean exactly and how they appear inside a sentence.

The letter could benefit from a more organized structure. Consider dividing it into clear paragraphs, each focusing on one aspect (course details, university recommendation, application advice). Let's also not lose sight of Proofread the letter for spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors to enhance overall professionalism.

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The 6.5 sample upgraded to 7.0+

Dear Alex,

I hope this letter finds you quite fit as fiddle. It's fantastic to learn that you're considering applying for the Genetics at Yale University, the very course I completed. Throughout my time there, the program proved to be a dynamic exploration of Genetics, combining theoretical depth with practical applications.

I highly recommend Yale University for its exceptional faculty, fostering an intellectually stimulating environment. The emphasis on real-world relevance in the curriculum sets it apart, ensuring a holistic learning experience. The vibrant campus life and diverse community further contribute to a fulfilling academic journey.

As you start the application process, make sure to review the admission requirements on the university's website. Articulate your passion for the subject, showcase your academic achievements, and highlight any relevant experiences. Submit your application well before the deadline to ensure consideration.

Wishing you the best in this exciting step of life. If you have any further questions, feel free to reach out.

Warm Regards,

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