IELTS Writing Task 1 letter sample 3230 – Band 6.5

General Training IELTS Writing Task 1 - Letter

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday

Describe some possible disadvantages

Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ......................................................... ,

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Candidate’s Response:

Dear Tom,

I hope this letter finds you well. It’s a great news that you are planning to go camping around Lake Louise. I am really excited about this fantastic news and it seems to be a great opportunity for you to overcome your phobia of camping.

Recently, you have been occupied with your job and I’m sure camping is a great idea to get rid of everything for a couple of days. Honestly, fresh air of Lake Louise, its untouched nature and the sounds of birds are extremely breath-taking which is captivating all viewers and you are no exception.

I’m afraid that there are some off-track routes which you could be lost easily if you are not following your guide. I would like to suggest having insect repellent spray with yourself, as insects are really bothering while you’re sleeping.

I am planning to travel to the USA to participate in my brother’s wedding party this summer. Although I cannot come with you and this situation is out of my control, I would love to accompany you on the camping.

Lots of love,

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Planning Stage

Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

June 27, 2024

This is an IELTS writing band 6.5 sample

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Disclaimer

The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.

IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Achievement (GT)

7.0 covers the requirements of the task

8.0 presents, highlights and illustrates bullet points clearly and appropriately

7.0 clearly presents and highlights bullet points but could be more fully extended

9.0 presents a clear purpose

7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0 logically organizes information and ideas

7.0 there is clear progression throughout

6.0 uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical

6.0 may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately

7.0 presents a clear central topic within each paragraph

6.0

Lexical Resource

7.0 uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision

7.0 uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation

7.0 may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation

6.0 they do not impede communication

6.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0 uses a variety of complex structures

8.0 the majority of sentences are error-free

7.0 has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors

7.0 they do not impede communication

7.0

6.5

Feedback:

Thank you indeed for writing this letter. Present continuous tense gives the writer a more powerful, targeted tool; the essay must be able to justify its use; otherwise, the present simple tense is a safer choice.

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The 6.5 sample upgraded to 7.0+

Hey

I hope this letter finds you well and excited for the upcoming summer! I was thrilled to hear that you're considering going on your first camping holiday this year and wanted to share some thoughts and advice with you.

First of all, I believe you'd absolutely love a camping trip. There's something truly special about immersing yourself in the great outdoors. The fresh air, the tranquility, and the chance to disconnect from the hustle and bustle of daily life can be incredibly rejuvenating. It's a fantastic way to unwind, relax, and appreciate the beauty of nature. Whether it's sitting by the campfire under the starry night sky, hiking through scenic trails, or waking up to the sounds of chirping birds, the experience is both grounding and liberating.

However, like any adventure, camping does come with a few potential disadvantages. Weather can be unpredictable, so be prepared for rain or extreme temperatures. Insects and mosquitoes might be a bit of a nuisance, so make sure to pack some insect repellent. Also, camping often means limited access to modern conveniences like showers and electricity, so you'll need to adapt to a simpler way of living during your trip.

As for me, I would absolutely love to go camping with you this summer! It would be fantastic to share this experience with a great friend. We can choose a beautiful location, plan our meals together, and make lasting memories around the campfire.

So, what do you say? Let's embark on this adventure together and make it a summer to remember! Feel free to get in touch, and we can start planning our camping escapade. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Warm regards,

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