IELTS Writing Task 1 letter sample 3225 – Band 7.5

General Training IELTS Writing Task 1 - Letter

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter

give details of your study plans

explain why you want to get a part-time job

suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

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Candidate’s Response:

Dear Smith,

I hope everything is fine. I am going to move to Venice for my Master’s next month and I would like to ask you about the part-time jobs available for students.

The first semesters might be challenging for me. I should take five courses each semester which have both course projects and final exams. Beside courses, there is a team project that I should complete to get my final degree. The program should take a maximum two years, and I will join the program in Fall 2021.

I think it is necessary to find a job in the first semester to cover my expenses. As far as I know, the living cost is at least six thousand Euros and I will be only able to cover my tuition fees with my investment. I might be able to survive the first two months without having a job, otherwise I should return home country.

I am sure that you can help me with job hunting. I remember that you were a barista in a small cafe in your neighbourhood. I have some hands-on experience in making different hot and cold beverages. Can you recommend me to your boss? If I make sure that I have a job before moving to Venice, you help me deal with the stress of covering my expenses.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best,

Arash

231 words

Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

December 2, 2023

This is an IELTS writing band 7.5 sample

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Disclaimer

The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.

IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Achievement (GT)

9.0 fully satisfies all the requirements of the task

9.0 clearly presents a fully developed response

9.0 details are fully and clearly extended.

9.0 presents a clear purpose

9.0

Coherence and Cohesion

9.0 sequences information and ideas logically

8.0 manages all aspects of cohesion well

9.0 uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately

9.0 uses referencing clearly and appropriately throughout

8.0 uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately

8.0

Lexical Resource

9.0 uses a wide range of vocabulary

7.0 uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation

8.0 produces rare errors in spelling and/or word formation

9.0 the communication is completely natural

7.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0 uses a variety of complex structures

8.0 the majority of sentences are error-free

7.0 has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors

9.0 communication is completely natural

7.0

7.5

Feedback:

Thank you indeed for writing this letter. This is an excellent letter, especially in tone and details provided. All it needs for a higher score is better word control and more accurate structures.

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Another Above 7.0 Sample

Dear Sam,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am excited to share my upcoming plans with you as I prepare to come to Australia for my studies. I have been accepted into Michigan University for a Master program and will be arriving in two months..

During my time in Australia, I am eager to take on a part-time job to support my living expenses and gain valuable work experience. I believe this will not only contribute to my financial well-being but also allow me to immerse myself in the local culture.

Given your familiarity with [Australia, I was wondering if you could provide some guidance or assistance in finding a suitable part-time job. Your local insights and connections could be invaluable in helping me secure employment.

I greatly value our friendship and any support you can offer. I look forward to your advice and hope to catch up with you soon.

Warm Regards,

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