IELTS Writing Task 1 letter sample 3217 – Band 5.5

General Training IELTS Writing Task 1 - Letter

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.

Write a letter to the local council. In your letter

describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly

explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours

suggest what should be done about the problem

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Environment, Policies and Government, Society and Community, Task 1 Letter, Writing samples, Writing topics

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Disclaimer

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Candidate’s Response:

Dear Mr Smith

I am writing to you regarding the system of rubbish collection which, used in residential area where i live.

Firstly, when we head for putting the garbage in the bin which has an automatic system for receiving the bag. It throws way it on the ground; also, arriving late, which is annoying.

Moreover, this problem has affected me and my neighbours in negative way which is not tolerable. As the remnisent of the garbage has scattered on the ground. It caused me and the neeighbourhoods to confront with a mess as a result of it, therefore, the smell of such items which have, located on the ground in unorganized way, is disgusting; in addition, endangers our health.

I suppose that for improving this unfavorable situation, you should send a group of technicians to fix this bin and also examine the other bins which has located in other locals for preventing from similar problem. Also, i will appreciate your apartment to coordinate a team for cleaning such items which has been littered on the alley.

I am looking forward to seeing your great coordinations in this regard

best regards.

193 words

Presented By: Shahab Hosseinzadeh

November 23, 2023

This is an IELTS writing band 5.5 sample

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Disclaimer

The writing sample displayed here is the work of IELTS candidates and has been assessed by our team for guidance and practice purposes. These scores are not official IELTS scores.

IELTS Writing Band Descriptors:

Task Achievement (GT)

6.0 addresses the requirements of the task

7.0 with the tone consistent and appropriate

7.0 clearly presents and highlights bullet points but could be more fully extended

6.0 presents a purpose that is generally clear

6.0

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0 logically organizes information and ideas

7.0 there is clear progression throughout

6.0 uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical

6.0 may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately

7.0 presents a clear central topic within each paragraph

6.0

Lexical Resource

6.0 uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task

6.0 attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy

5.0 may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or word formation

5.0 that may cause some difficulty for the reader

5.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

6.0 uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms

6.0 complex sentences have the same accuracy as the simple ones do

5.0 makes frequent grammatical errors, and punctuation may be faulty

5.0 errors can cause some difficulty for the reader

5.0

5.5

Feedback:

Thank you indeed for writing this letter. There are major errors in vocabulary and grammar which damage the reader’s comprehension of the text. It is always better to write clearly instead of cleverly.

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The 5.5 sample upgraded to 7.0+

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to express my concerns about the ongoing issues with the rubbish collection system in our local area.

The current system is not working properly as it often results in missed collections and delayed pickups. This has led to overflowing bins, littered streets, and an unsightly environment for both myself and my neighbors. Furthermore, the presence of excess waste attracts pests and poses health risks.

I kindly suggest that the local council take immediate action to address this problem. Increasing the frequency of rubbish collections, especially in densely populated areas like ours, would be a practical solution. Additionally, enforcing a strict collection schedule is essential to maintain cleanliness and hygiene.

I urge the council to consider these recommendations to improve the rubbish collection system and enhance the quality of life in our community.

Thank you for your attention to this matter.

Regards

150 words