Why trees lose their leaves

A standard paragraph

by | Jul 12, 2019 | Writing

This is a standard paragraph that expresses only the writer’s opinion. Remember! In the IELTS writing test (Task 2), you are assessed based on your writing skills and good support, not your opinions or facts.

      Trees shed their leaves for three main reasons. First and foremost, they do this as a strategy to survive harsh weather conditions. For instance, in fall, when there are strong winds, if trees had fresh green leaves on them, the chances of their breaking would increase dramatically. Another trick is thatbare branches can stand the weight of winter snow much better and do not normally break. What is more, leafless trees let the sunshine reach the ground and provide heat for the otherwise frozen world of minuscule creatures living underneath. And last but not least, the shedding of leaves may help trees to pollinate come springtime. Without leaves to get in the way, wind-blown pollen can travel longer distances and reach more trees. Therefore, we should not feel sorry for the seemingly lifeless trees as they know exactly what they are doing!

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About the Author

About the Author

CEO and Co-founder of Juice Academy

Mehdi Safavi is a Cambridge certified English teacher (CELTA Grade A), IDP-trained IELTS expert, Sussex Downs College TESOL with 17+ years of teaching & teacher training experience. More about him →

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